weekly words: telephone, rain, sheet, fuzzy, listen (a bit late)

[semperfiona]

Fuzzy silence in her head
Covers her within the bed--
Sleep a deep and heavy black
Thing that lies upon her back--
She listens to the rain
Sheeting down the windowpane.
Inaudibly the telephone
Calls her lost heart softly home.

Comments

[sistercoyote.livejournal.com]

Ooh.

The last two lines gave me chills.

[submarine-bells.livejournal.com]

Me too! Thanks for sharing that.

[quasigeostrophy.livejournal.com]

Brrrr!

[lavendargrrl.livejournal.com]

Oooooo...I really liked this one...very lyrical and almost poignant...